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Sweep Me Away, My Love Part I
Date Written: February 3, 2016
Sweep me away, my love, into the blue shores of the east,
Seize my sorrow as you reach for my delicate heart,
I have listened alone to the tunes that carry my release,
you have allowed my soul searching wonder to light its spark.
Sweep me away, my love, let us sail to our own island,
Let me concentrate on taking your height to pleasure,
I don't need any gold and wouldn't accept any diamonds,
but the core of your chest shall be my greatest treasure.
Sweep me away, my love, as we share delicate moments,
A gentle kiss on my forehead will set off my desire,
Creating sweet sounds of love with a euphony of instruments,
For only you, my sweet man, know how to light my fire.
Sweep me away, my love, up our mountain in the sky,
Feel my body yearn for you as we climb up to the peak,
My body tingling with anticipation on a natural high,
Shhhhh...let's be quiet tonight, there's no need to speak.
Sweep me away, my love, towards our life of forever,
For you are my radiance of light, my greatest endeavor.
Sweep Me Away, My Love Part II
Date Written : February 28, 2016
Sweep me away, my love, into the room closed just for us,
Romanticism is evident whenever I feel your breath down my neck,
Dance with me from the early hours of dawn until the tender dusk,
I love when you play with my silky hair, you've always loved brunettes.
Sweep me away, my love, let's explore the falling of water by the creek,
Contrary to what beliefs we cherish, we'll always have that starry night,
The pieces of our puzzle has brought me to a heart so much more complete.
There is no more separation within our circle while our two bodies unite.
Sweep me away, my love, free me from the altitude too low to breathe,
I was made to be with you, you were made to carry me to the top,
set the candles and spread the roses, open the window for the breeze,
We'll stare at each other all night long, oh please I beg you not to stop.
Sweep me away, my love, north seems so much brighter than the south,
Whisper sweet secrets into my heart forgetting all the noise down below,
Strawberries and sweet champagne, your taste lingers in my mouth.
Let's release our burdens for one night, stay quiet and lose control.
Sweep me away, my love, break down my walls as only you can,
For you are the constant reminder of why I love my life, my sweet man.
Written By: Laura Loo
Copyright © Lu Loo | Year Posted 2016