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Sweep Me Away, My Love Part I Date Written: February 3, 2016 Sweep me away, my love, into the blue shores of the east, Seize my sorrow as you reach for my delicate heart, I have listened alone to the tunes that carry my release, you have allowed my soul searching wonder to light its spark. Sweep me away, my love, let us sail to our own island, Let me concentrate on taking your height to pleasure, I don't need any gold and wouldn't accept any diamonds, but the core of your chest shall be my greatest treasure. Sweep me away, my love, as we share delicate moments, A gentle kiss on my forehead will set off my desire, Creating sweet sounds of love with a euphony of instruments, For only you, my sweet man, know how to light my fire. Sweep me away, my love, up our mountain in the sky, Feel my body yearn for you as we climb up to the peak, My body tingling with anticipation on a natural high, Shhhhh...let's be quiet tonight, there's no need to speak. Sweep me away, my love, towards our life of forever, For you are my radiance of light, my greatest endeavor. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sweep Me Away, My Love Part II Date Written : February 28, 2016 Sweep me away, my love, into the room closed just for us, Romanticism is evident whenever I feel your breath down my neck, Dance with me from the early hours of dawn until the tender dusk, I love when you play with my silky hair, you've always loved brunettes. Sweep me away, my love, let's explore the falling of water by the creek, Contrary to what beliefs we cherish, we'll always have that starry night, The pieces of our puzzle has brought me to a heart so much more complete. There is no more separation within our circle while our two bodies unite. Sweep me away, my love, free me from the altitude too low to breathe, I was made to be with you, you were made to carry me to the top, set the candles and spread the roses, open the window for the breeze, We'll stare at each other all night long, oh please I beg you not to stop. Sweep me away, my love, north seems so much brighter than the south, Whisper sweet secrets into my heart forgetting all the noise down below, Strawberries and sweet champagne, your taste lingers in my mouth. Let's release our burdens for one night, stay quiet and lose control. Sweep me away, my love, break down my walls as only you can, For you are the constant reminder of why I love my life, my sweet man. Written By: Laura Loo

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Date: 3/1/2016 12:05:00 PM
Excellent pen Laura!Beautifully painted picture in this piece. A 7! And thanks again for visiting my page!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D.
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Date: 3/1/2016 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Dorian, God bless you too!!! :)-luloo *Smiles*
Date: 2/29/2016 11:19:00 AM
Your poems were a warm, sensual encounter for your readers and I suspect for you. Nicely told.
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Date: 2/29/2016 11:47:00 AM
thank you Charlie :)-luloo
Date: 2/28/2016 4:08:00 PM
oh sooo romantic LuLoo such a gorgeous rhyme:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:27:00 PM
Thank you lady :)-luloo
Date: 2/28/2016 3:24:00 PM
Laura, sooooo romantic. The passion in your words is palpable. Lovely! I hope to see this a top winner. #7 --(a comment from Connie Marcum Wong..Connie asked me to paste this comment from her, for some reason it didn't let her post a comment...) Thank you Connie, you are very sweet :)-luloo
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