Sweeney

the barber’s fall,
a curtain call,
he snips and twirls
creating curls;
that close shave,
may be grave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gall Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 7:36 AM
I’d like to say thanks to Silent One for his kind comment on Sweeney. Unfortunately I deleted his message by mistake :)
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February 16, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Cool little poem! I like it!
Gall Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Thanks for your feedback and encouragement Maureen. I'm looking forward to reading your poems. Desi
DiMino Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 7:58 AM
A classic for sure, like your little poem. Excellent!
Gall Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 2:52 PM
Thanks for your feedback and encouragement Joe. I'm looking forward to reading your poems. Desi
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