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Sweats and Sweets

Sweats and Sweets Skinny sleek working in hot sun and extreme cold, Earns his blood while making both ends meet, Determination sweats as salty drops of pure gold, Sound sleep of content at night does greet, Hard work embraces the success so sweet ! English quintain Written June 19th, 2015 For contest by Olive Theme- success

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Date: 7/1/2015 9:05:00 PM
Congratulations, dear Dr. Upma, on your sweet win! Awesome imagery in this inspirational piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 6/30/2015 6:13:00 PM
awesome
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Date: 6/30/2015 12:10:00 AM
Dr Upma, this is a nice sweet win *Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/28/2015 4:06:00 PM
A lovely way to tackle this topical poem, Upma. Success is the fruit of hard work. Congratulations on a very fine win. // paul
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Date: 6/28/2015 3:04:00 PM
Many congratulations Dr Upma on your placing in Olive's contest, James :) :)
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Date: 6/28/2015 1:30:00 PM
Compactly does the job. Well done, Dr. Upma. Viv x
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Date: 6/28/2015 10:28:00 AM
Dr. Upma, Short solid lines that deliver much on SWEATS and SWEETS at once! Nicely done! COGRATULATIONS!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:11:00 AM
I enjoyed this sweet treat.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/25/2015 2:26:00 AM
Thnx a lot Richard!
Date: 6/19/2015 9:27:00 AM
a hard toil is sweetened by fervor.. lovely write, dr.upma..huggs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/25/2015 2:27:00 AM
Thnx a lot dearie nette!

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