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Sweats and Sweets

Sweats and Sweets I put on my sweats I eat the sweets belly so big can’t see my feets. //not submitted to contest// John G. Lawless 6/3/2015

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Date: 6/15/2015 9:03:00 AM
Cute!
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Date: 6/4/2015 8:08:00 AM
John this is hilarious. Good luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, on broken wings
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Date: 6/4/2015 4:01:00 AM
quick and quirky...and good
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Date: 6/4/2015 1:55:00 AM
ha ha ha:-) Hugs jan xx Wish we could do any form for the contest it would be much easier to pen a poem for it:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/3/2015 11:22:00 PM
LOL, not you too. I love them sweets ... not the belly
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Date: 6/3/2015 9:22:00 PM
Ha Ha! Love this, John! It's a tough theme, but you sure did it justice in such a humorous way! Sandra
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