Sweats and Sweets

Sweats and Sweets 


I put on my sweats
I eat the sweets
belly so big
can’t see my feets.


//not submitted to contest//


John G. Lawless
6/3/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 9:03 AM
Cute!
La France Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 8:08 AM
John this is hilarious. Good luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, on broken wings
Van Akkeren Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 4:01 AM
quick and quirky...and good
Allison Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 1:55 AM
ha ha ha:-) Hugs jan xx Wish we could do any form for the contest it would be much easier to pen a poem for it:-) Hugs jan xx
A  Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 11:22 PM
LOL, not you too. I love them sweets ... not the belly
Haight Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 9:22 PM
Ha Ha! Love this, John! It's a tough theme, but you sure did it justice in such a humorous way! Sandra
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