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Sweats and Sweets

Sweats and Sweets
I’m jogging very quickly in my sweats
To reach my seventh mile without delay
Insatiably my fervor for a treat
I can’t control a taste for something sweet
Although I had no breakfast fare to eat
The sixth mile has me sweating in my sweats
But soon I’ll reach that place with no regrets
My thoughts are of her as we reach the bend
The seventh mile has come and here I am
Our sweat and sweets commingled in the end.
 Ralph Sergi  Contest June 2, 2015
Olive Eloisa Guillermo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/15/2015 9:02:00 AM
I enjoyed Ralph.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/15/2015 9:24:00 AM
Hi Richard : Thanks for your comment
Date: 6/3/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thanks for sharing, Sara.
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Date: 6/3/2015 1:56:00 PM
Creative collaboration for a contest?..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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