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Sweat

Ah, the salty scent of sweat, A powerful bouquet, Infusing all with noxious stink That will not go away. Think locker room or subway car Or summer’s sultry stench; Olfactory assaults may come On beach or bus or bench. With spikes in the humidity, Deodorants may droop And unprotected armpits cause Bacteria to swoop. Then people’s bodies will react And soon they’ll start to reek. The funny thing is everybody’s Essence is unique. It’s kind of unavoidable That odors start to bloom; Since summer’s here, we should prepare For negative perfume.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/30/2013 1:17:00 PM
I may sweat, but I don't stink. At least that's what I used to think. Until one day I went away and forgot to use the stuff. Somebody said to me outloud. Dear Sir, enoughs, enough. This is not true. Just rhyming. :)
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Date: 6/29/2013 9:41:00 AM
Ilene, Ilene, Ilene....I don't know what to write! Seriously! How? How do you do it? Such perfect rhyming about.....sweat! Incredible! I loved this. I'm like a duck in the summertime....in and out of the shower constantly to avoid this odorous problem! Hugs!
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