Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

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Swaying Nature

tight path reach an end
half the bay gets lost in haze
will sun ever shine?

dandelion wrecked
drifts at the kitchen window
pleasant southern wind

withered apple core
sits in a vacant park place
shifting brown to black

Written: May 15, 2023

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Sara Kendrick February 19, 2024 at 12:09 PM At least the apple cores will help fertilize that park. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. Sara K

Brian Sambourne May 31, 2023 at 11:41 AM A grand string of Haikus. I especially like how you move from the larger scene of haze over the bay to a decaying apple core receding to black. Excellent images to convey natural occurrences (like spring dandelions) to shifting colors. Best wishes, Brian

Paige Hind May 16, 2023 at 9:59 AM Beautiful haiku! Love the references to the sun and the dandelion.

Yann Rolland May 16, 2023 at 7:25 AM colorful and delightful, enjoyed very much, yann

Alexis Y. May 16, 2023 at 6:05 AM Hi Lasaad, Your well-written string of haikus has good content and imagery. Well done. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit May 16, 2023 at 5:47 AM Great imagery, Lasaad.

Victor Buhagiar May 16, 2023 at 2:02 AM Perfect haikus. Not my forte.

Valsa George May 15, 2023 at 8:34 PM I feel the pleasant southern wind and the hazy atmosphere ! Beautiful haiku series....