Swaying

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swaying locks of long green hair dangling in the wind posted on June 27, 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/28/2019 4:55:00 AM

I am seeing this willow with the wind blowing her tresses against themselves.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/28/2019 5:34:00 AM

A magical scene, Caren. Love weeping willows.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/27/2019 4:39:00 PM

the green hair made me smile Line, a fun haiku:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/27/2019 5:42:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Considering I was writing about a weeping willow. Tried to add photo but couldn't, not sure why.