Swathe of Stillness

Whistling wind plays flute in
orchestra of air
where flying on music
birds in blue share.

Music flows rippling in
broken heart in despair
as stillness swathes soul
with bliss so rare.

November 26, 2019
Contest : McWhirtle Me
Sponsor : Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 2:34 PM
beautifully penned Subimal, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
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December 24, 2019 at 12:37 PM
Well done, Subimal! Congratulations on your win. Happy Holidays to you and your family :) Charlie
Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 4:27 AM
This one is blissful, Subimal!
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 9:45 AM
Great write Subimal, should do well in the contest!
Canerdy Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Beautiful, moving piece--excellent use of metaphor. Janice
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