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Swathe of Stillness

Whistling wind plays flute in orchestra of air where flying on music birds in blue share. Music flows rippling in broken heart in despair as stillness swathes soul with bliss so rare. November 26, 2019 Contest : McWhirtle Me Sponsor : Charles Messina

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Date: 12/26/2019 2:34:00 PM
beautifully penned Subimal, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/24/2019 12:37:00 PM
Well done, Subimal! Congratulations on your win. Happy Holidays to you and your family :) Charlie
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Date: 12/5/2019 4:27:00 AM
This one is blissful, Subimal!
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Date: 11/26/2019 9:45:00 AM
Great write Subimal, should do well in the contest!
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Date: 11/26/2019 8:29:00 AM
Beautiful, moving piece--excellent use of metaphor. Janice
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