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Swansong

SWANSONG
The greatest performance of my life, I gave at that audition. I’d studied the role for days on end, Perfecting my rendition. I’d rehearsed the scene a hundred times, Studying each inflection And, as I stood upon the stage, I knew I’d reached perfection. I stood there in the spotlight And delivered my very best. The director up there in row F Was sure to be impressed.. When I’d finished he thanked me For coming along today, But he said I wasn’t quite right For that particular play. In fact, he told me frankly, It was his firm impression, That, to make a decent living, I was in the wrong profession. I thanked him for his sage advice And made my exit fast. The greatest performance of my life Had proved to be my last. 28th May 2022 The Greatest Performance of My Life poetry contest Sponsor - JCB Brul

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Date: 7/14/2022 3:49:00 PM
Oh, that's a shame. However, I'm sure you're a success in your job now because your work ethic is to be applauded!
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Date: 7/13/2022 4:19:00 PM
Bryn, you have turned a heartbreaking disappointment into an excellent poem. Congrats for your #1 win.
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Date: 7/13/2022 6:27:00 AM
Though looks discouraging, great performance and beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/30/2022 6:16:00 AM
You are very skilled poet, so I ask you not let this be your swansong in poetry. I like this poem very much even though I was rooting for you to get the job,lol.
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 5/31/2022 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Charles. Pity you weren't the director!

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