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each day I take a walk in the park and spend time with the white swans gliding with such grace on the flowing river just watching I could gaze at them forever their beauty unfathomable and peaceful what a gift they are then . . . what a surprise to behold a swan comes floating close with a baby on her back I think she was showing me her little one back and forth she paddles fluffing up her wings then suddenly swans come from the green reeds and wildflowers paddling quickly in a circle dance baby swans come sailing . . . _______________________ April 4, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Swans Sailing Copyright Protected, ID 19-1147-452-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into, Contest 600, Free Verse sponsor, Brian Strand Fourth Place

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Date: 6/13/2019 10:48:00 AM
Such a sweet poem with a darling picture of swan babies!! Loved reading it! -Smita
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Constance La France
Date: 6/13/2019 10:55:00 AM
Smita, thank you for visiting, oh yes the baby swans are adorable!
Date: 6/1/2019 8:40:00 PM
The graceful swans in your poem are as enchanting as your lovely poetry, Dear Heart. Beautiful and uplifting. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Constance La France
Date: 6/2/2019 5:39:00 PM
Susan, I loved writing this poem and I appreciate your congratulations~
Date: 5/30/2019 3:07:00 PM
This poem is a treat to behold. Love it. Congrats on your win, Constance:-)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/2/2019 5:38:00 PM
Edward, thanks for the congrats and nice comment, appreciate ~
Date: 5/28/2019 8:54:00 AM
So bright and beautiful! A gift, dear one! Hugs...Kim
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Constance La France
Date: 5/28/2019 10:58:00 AM
Kim, thanks so much for visiting with the beautiful and hugs !

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