Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Light Verse

- Swans Or Snowflakes -

Soft and sensitive they fall

    Is it beautiful white swans

    with fluffy white feathers light

    Tickles on the nose

    A moment poignant and beautiful

    that it is impossible to remain unmoved

    The whole sky full

    Millions of snowflakes

    they fall softly no sound

    Silence ... hold your breath

    They melt in my hands

    So similar, but so different

    It falls millions of snowflakes

    and the earth is colored white









    05.12.2014
    A-L Andresen :)
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Subhashish Dasgupta January 10, 2015 at 9:13 AM elegant poem..... Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2015 at 11:57 AM - Thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - // Anne-Lise :)

Lesley Micuda December 31, 2014 at 11:17 AM both are such wonders of heaven, aren't they?! delicate and elegant and the purest of white! Lovely poem. Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2015 at 5:28 AM - Yes, they are Lesley :) - Thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Schneiter December 29, 2014 at 3:46 PM Awesome imagery. I feel I'm personally experiencing it. Beautiful composition, Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen December 30, 2014 at 3:03 AM - Paul, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish December 22, 2014 at 3:02 PM Nice winter poem! I celebrate Chanukah. Are there some Jewish people in Norway? Peace & Love Matthew Anish Anne-Lise Andresen December 22, 2014 at 3:42 PM - Yes, many Jewish in Norway, Matthew - Thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Mason December 16, 2014 at 7:58 AM wonderful poem anne lise, really enjoyed this one this morning. Warm thoughts, Ralph Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2014 at 8:14 AM - Ralph, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans December 13, 2014 at 4:44 PM I can just see and feel the snowflakes. There is something so magical about standing outside in the falling snow. Anne-Lise Andresen December 14, 2014 at 4:18 AM - Yes, it is - Dear Brenda, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock December 13, 2014 at 12:21 PM Both have their beauty. Snow has been melting here this week and above freezing so has been wonderful to be outside. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2014 at 1:39 PM - No snow here yet ...... rain, rain and rain - Dear Phyllis, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven December 12, 2014 at 6:49 AM You make this sound so enchanting, romantic, and unmissable. Enjoy the season. Anne-Lise Andresen December 12, 2014 at 7:48 AM - Scott, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley December 9, 2014 at 9:41 AM A gentle and inspiring poem my friend! A pleasure to read and see such images come forth . Super 7 on this one and I agree, snowflakes and white swans are beautiful... Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2014 at 11:15 AM - Robert, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty December 9, 2014 at 7:14 AM snowflakes are metaphor for swan. real good. "millions of snowflakes" I feel their warmth...love to your cuteself the baby Anne-Lise. Hugs! ...rajat Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2014 at 7:37 AM - Rajat, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 8, 2014 at 11:46 PM beautiful Anne Lise.. ! :) love the calm yet so delicately painted portrait from your words.. :)! xoxo.. :) Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2014 at 3:16 AM - Olive, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud December 8, 2014 at 1:17 PM more happy snowflakes this sunday, anne.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2014 at 1:58 PM - Huggs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis December 8, 2014 at 12:47 PM Exhilarating picture of purity! Wonderfully done, dear Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2014 at 1:57 PM - Demetrios, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux December 8, 2014 at 8:07 AM You had me right from the title, beautiful! Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2014 at 11:19 AM - Richard, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne December 8, 2014 at 5:36 AM I too love snowfalls. An amazing write on one of my favorite loves. Thank you! Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2014 at 6:18 AM - I'm glad you enjoy my poem Maurice, thank you for comments and visit - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sibusiso Lubimbi December 8, 2014 at 1:17 AM i felt every detail of your poem, saw each description in my mind. I am out of words i wish i could write poems half as good as this. Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2014 at 3:08 AM - Sibusiso, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones December 7, 2014 at 10:18 PM Lovely and magical seasonal treat dear Anne Lise..just lovely...and who is the cutie in your avatar? Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2014 at 3:07 AM - The cute baby is just a picture I found on the net :)) - Thank you Donna for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman December 7, 2014 at 12:59 PM Hello Anne-Lise, Dropping by here to read your latest very fine write my dear friend!!You've got the "magic touch" indeed with your words here and the imagery, and the cadence of your verses is enchanting!! A most beautiful and heartfelt write!! A "7" and a FAV from me!! Best Wishes Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2014 at 1:33 PM - Thank you for beautiful comments, my dear friend Gary ..... "7" and not least a fav. - Always nice to read your commets - greatly appreciate your visit - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode December 7, 2014 at 11:10 AM Just exactlly the way it is Anne,what a good Expression! I love this,kudos for this great work...huggs Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2014 at 1:35 PM - I'm glad you enjoy my poem Kayod5, thank you for comments and visit - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian December 7, 2014 at 8:51 AM Thank you so much for reminding me of my childhood with this enchanting write, Sunshine! It is magical...It really is! Love you! Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2014 at 10:47 AM - Kind memories I hope, dear Eileen - Thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam December 7, 2014 at 6:19 AM Excellent. Very delightful writing. Always love your poems. Thanks for sharing Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2014 at 6:23 AM - Ravi, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nathan D. December 7, 2014 at 12:24 AM very lively write with great imagery and expression. Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2014 at 4:57 AM - Nathan, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath December 6, 2014 at 11:54 AM Excellent winter's picture adorned on the green pitch of the earth with pure white color. Loved always, my lovely lovely beautiful friend,bl Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2014 at 12:03 PM - Dear Bl, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak December 6, 2014 at 7:20 AM I feel like I have stepped into a winter wonderland; beauty, silence and snow. Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2014 at 11:40 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Monterey - We do not have snow yet ..... but, a lot of rain - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 6, 2014 at 2:23 AM Superb imagery so well woven Into tender words Anne Lise! Great work! Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2014 at 4:05 AM - Dr.Upma, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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