swan's ballet

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Brian Strands' Contest: Your Choice K ... 9 Apr 25

toes en pointé reeling high dancer of swans her brisk frame...pirouetting like night wind---- I watch her arms flip when tragedy lurks pas de deux wanes cascading i n t o death 2md place

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Paige Hind

Date: 4/10/2025 2:32:00 PM

A haunting piece. It's in my favs.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/10/2025 11:13:00 AM

Nette, a great summary of swan lake. I had to refresh myself on the plot. An interesting love story told in this way. What made you think of this? Just curious. Smiles!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/9/2025 5:46:00 PM

The 'Fall of (and from) Grace' so eloquently depicted here, Nette. Thank you for sharing, Gershon

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/9/2025 12:36:00 PM

Nette, tragedy lurks, she sounds lovely, while he in despair ~ dramatic entry!

Maria Williams

Date: 4/9/2025 3:17:00 AM

Dear Nette,what a beautifully haunting piece — the imagery of the swan dancer pirouetting into darkness is so moving. The structure echoes the fall of the dance, and the elegance carries such emotional weight. All the best in the contest...Hugs