swan's ballet

toes
en pointé
reeling  high
dancer of swans
her brisk frame...pirouetting like night wind----
I watch her arms flip when  tragedy lurks
pas de deux wanes
cascading
i n t o
death

2md place

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Paige Hind

April 10, 2025 at 2:32 PM

A haunting piece. It's in my favs.

Duke Beaufort

April 10, 2025 at 11:13 AM

Nette, a great summary of swan lake. I had to refresh myself on the plot. An interesting love story told in this way. What made you think of this? Just curious. Smiles!!

Gershon Wolf

April 9, 2025 at 5:46 PM

The 'Fall of (and from) Grace' so eloquently depicted here, Nette. Thank you for sharing, Gershon

I Am Anaya

April 9, 2025 at 12:36 PM

Nette, tragedy lurks, she sounds lovely, while he in despair ~ dramatic entry!

Maria Williams

April 9, 2025 at 3:17 AM

Dear Nette,what a beautifully haunting piece — the imagery of the swan dancer pirouetting into darkness is so moving. The structure echoes the fall of the dance, and the elegance carries such emotional weight. All the best in the contest...Hugs

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