Swans At Coole Park

Summer's sweet swans share 
    white winged feathers
Wild and free as they bow their 
     long graceful necks.
Artistic as a poet's painting 
     of fecund flora,
Nature's lough at Coole, their 
      peaceful dwelling place.

These white majestic creatures 
      swim silently near shore,
Aesthetics adorn blue wondrous
      waters in a white flotilla
As reposeful ripples evenly extend
      to encompass the heart.

Coole's liquid sheen shimmers in 
      Lugh's luminous aquatic
Oneness, as mating pairs begin 
      their winsome waltz 
On placid waters where swan 
      calls echo in stereo.
Lilac's sweet scent in breezes 
      serene and romantic
Elevate the soul as evening's 
      elysium visions enshrine.

6-27-20

~First Place~
Summer Love Poetry Contest
Sponsor Chantelle Anne Cooke

*Coole: ( Irish: An Chúil) is a village in County Westmeath, Ireland
*Lough - Irish word for a lake - a body of (usually fresh) water surrounded by land
*Lugh-the god whose name means "shining one" was a Celtic sun god.

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Date: 2/27/2022 4:25:00 AM
Reading your poem, I am reminded of a poem The Wild Swans at Coolie by William Butler Yeats. While I was teaching it to the Graduate students, years ago, I enjoyed that poem so much ! So do I enjoy the poem written by you dear Connie.
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Date: 3/11/2021 6:07:00 PM
Connie.... just lovely. I am there in sight, sound, smell and tranquility that you have captured so brilliantly. Love this ! Blessings to you, Susan :) Belated congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/6/2020 9:21:00 AM
A beautiful picture of placid serenity, Connie. So glad I came across it today. Last time I was in London, I was staying in a townhouse right on the Thames with the queen's swans gliding by every day. Your poem brought back all of those memories! Think of you often these day. Prayers and blessings!
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Date: 7/23/2020 7:12:00 AM
Hi Connie, another beautiful, gentle write from your golden pen. Your gentle words paint such vividly wonderful images in the mind, the song of nature, as only you can do. Another fav from me, Connie. May your pen ever run gold. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/23/2020 9:06:00 AM
It is so nice to hear from you my friend. Thank you very much for your lovely sentiments and especially honoring this poem with a fave. Blessings xxoo
Date: 7/19/2020 2:29:00 PM
So beautiful! Congratulations Connie :)
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Date: 7/17/2020 8:45:00 PM
what a well deserved win, Connie. I can't believe I had not even seen this one yet. BIG congratulations. It's so wondrous!
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Date: 7/15/2020 11:09:00 AM
You touched on many of our senses with the echo of swans' cries, the sight of them on the water and the scent of the lilacs. A lovely poem and a fave for me, Connie. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 7/17/2020 10:33:00 PM
It won first place Carolyn. Thank you so much for honoring my poem with a fave. Blessings xxoo
Date: 7/10/2020 2:53:00 PM
oh, this is beautiful - a sure winner
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Date: 7/8/2020 9:13:00 AM
Such a picturesque painting of a lake and its swans, congratulations on your win, Connie:)
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Date: 7/7/2020 1:42:00 PM
This is a beautiful write, Connie. Stay safe!
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Date: 7/7/2020 8:12:00 AM
Gosh this is such a picturesque masterpiece Connie! Every word drips soothing coolness in summer. I could sense bliss in my heart after reading this. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/8/2020 2:36:00 PM
My daughter and I visited Thoor Ballylee Tower at Coole where W.B. Yeats wrote many of his poems. It is where he lived with his family and summered for 9 years. We could feel his spirit still amidst the trees and lake where he thought was the most beautiful place. Thank you for leaving such a lovely comment Aditi. Blessings xxoo
Date: 7/6/2020 11:30:00 AM
Cool shivers run down my arms as I read this Connie, a winner for me, Have a blessed day dear friend, stay well, and healthy, xo
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Date: 7/5/2020 12:55:00 PM
This is beautiful and you ably manage to appeal to our senses, whilst transporting us to Coole Lough, Connie. I can tell that visiting Ireland has left a lasting impression on you (as this and earlier poems prove). Congratulations on placing first! ~ Warm regards & blessings // paul
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Date: 7/5/2020 11:06:00 AM
"Beautiful" Congratulation on your win. You are so right with your line, "These white majestic creatures." They are. Enjoy your day and win............
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Date: 7/5/2020 3:49:00 AM
Congrats!! dear poetess...superb rendering Connie...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/5/2020 12:05:00 AM
Back to congratulate and exult in your win. Love all you do, Connie!
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Date: 7/4/2020 9:47:00 PM
Nice use of alliteration in this lovely write Connie, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/4/2020 3:57:00 PM
Connie congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 7/4/2020 1:07:00 PM
Palapala maika'i, Connie, about swans, "Oneness, as mating pairs begin...", I always loved this type of phrasing, my compliments indeed for your achievement of 1st Place -- Me ke aloha pumehana~@William
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/4/2020 3:56:00 PM
Mahalo Nui Loa William. I love our black swans here on Oahu too. Both white and black swans are so graceful and easy to write about. I appreciate your lovely compliment. Pomaika’i, Aloha xxoo
Date: 7/3/2020 5:56:00 AM
Visiting this sweet poem once more, Connie...needed it...tough week last week...james
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/3/2020 1:24:00 PM
I totally understand James. I agree. My youngest daughter is mourning the loss of her 8 yr. old step-daughter because of the breakup of her family. She has moved back home with our 8 yr. old granddaughter. We are thrilled to have them yet understand how difficult this time is for our daughter. Blessings Connie xxoo
Date: 7/2/2020 8:34:00 PM
This is beautiful, Connie, and so tranquil! My mother-in-law loves swans, and she collects swan figurines. I'm going to share this with her. I know she'll love it...a fave for me. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/3/2020 1:26:00 PM
I so appreciate your lovely comment and fave Rhonda. My mother loved swans too. She passed away in 1994 but when I see white swans I think of her. Thank you very much. Blessings xxoo
Date: 7/2/2020 12:25:00 PM
What a marvelous write, you are so good at writing about nature and water and animals and flowers, you have an awesome grace that encompasses all your poetry. Blessings, dear Connie, and hugs, Jennifer.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/3/2020 1:28:00 PM
Thank you for such an awesome compliment Jennifer! It means a lot to me. I admire your poetry very much. Blessings xxoo
Date: 7/1/2020 1:56:00 PM
I used to see a lone swan every morning on a small pond... they are so graceful, as are your words my friend... wonderful imagery, wonderful write... hugs :)
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Date: 6/30/2020 8:42:00 PM
Hello Connie … its great how a verse does take us back to a time that reminds us of our own experience. I recall camping beside a lake and rising at dawn to gaze upon water glasslike and about 200 black swans making a graceful scene in the silence of sunrise - thank you Connie - Lindsay
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Date: 6/30/2020 5:15:00 PM
You paint a beautiful picture here Connie. Loved it. Gods Bless, JB
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