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swanning

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Swanning Around

Curved white, feathered neck, poised just right;
Half bird, half body, unfolds into bright light.
The face stays frozen, choosing not to show;
For the feathers alone, decide where eyes must go.

She glides and struts, poised with such fanfare,
Her garments become feathers to float on the air.
Her fine body vanquished, to shun any stare,
For she is merely the elegance, her garments wear.

She pauses, pivots, swings round, so debonair.
Her shoulder tilts, her wrist juts with flair.
Each measured turn commands its own grand grace.
As feathers swirl outward, to claim more space.

The white swans depart the catwalk in style,
Their black beaks can't even fashion a smile.
For that's the game— be serene, silent and proud—
Leaving only feathers to flit in the crowd.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Scragg Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 5:54 AM
Yes, I missed it. I didn't look at the categories under your name when I first read your poem. Silly me :/ ... the comparison to the swan highlights the elegance of the model. Still, a very beautiful poem. Loved very much :-D
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July 9, 2026 at 11:30 PM
Very beautifully described John and the accompanying picture enhances the glory you give to these wonderful creatures. They are so elegant, pure and radiant :-D... added to faves.
Anderson Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 11:43 PM
Thanks very much. It's actually about models on the catwalk and their postures etc. if you missed it. Thanks for the feedback. All the best .
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