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Swanling

Swanling called Ugly she weeps each day wakens this morn a swan… dazzling Written 11th May 2019 THIRD PLACE Contest Name: Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 –Cinqku Sponsor: Dear Heart Contest May 2019 Premier 5 max 5 Sponsor Brian Strand

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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2019 10:01:00 AM
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Ann, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautifully penned piece!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/14/2019 10:06:00 AM
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Thank you so much Constance for my win in your wonderful contest . I love the way your contests set me a challenge to try something I have never tried before - thank you! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/14/2019 8:54:00 AM
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Especially love your choice for the last line :) Nice write!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/14/2019 9:39:00 AM
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Thank you so much PS for your lovely comment. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2019 3:27:00 AM
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- A lovely poem, Ann :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/14/2019 3:31:00 AM
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Bless you Anne-Lise for your lovely congrats and hugs, with kindes thoughts Ann xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2019 1:02:00 AM
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what a sweet poem also reminds me of the ugly duckling by Danny Kaye:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/14/2019 3:17:00 AM
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Many thanks Jan for your congrats, yes I do remember that song, but I had not really thought of it until Tom reminded me. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Joseph May
Date: 5/13/2019 6:47:00 PM
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Congrats on your win Ann...
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/14/2019 3:13:00 AM
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Thank you so much Joseph for your lovely congrats! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/13/2019 6:28:00 PM
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cute title for the little swan . Congrats on your win.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/14/2019 3:12:00 AM
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Many thanks Andrea, yes I liked the word swanling too and had not heard it before. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/11/2019 9:30:00 PM
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Lovely, Ann. Beautiful.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/12/2019 3:28:00 AM
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Oh thank you so much Line for your lovely comment which always means so much coming from you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/11/2019 3:48:00 PM
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Nice cinqku Ann, reminded me of that song the ugly duckling. Good luck. Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/11/2019 4:05:00 PM
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Thank you Tom, oh yes I remember that song it used to be played on Junior Choice, always brought a tear to my eye! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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