Swan Song Lane

When the time is right
one again will walk with you unaided
in an eon of age,
where promises are made
not to conform to life’s illusions.
Only now this earthly spirit
will not last forever,
the journey has been long, now weary,
and this pen is spent
needs to fade
into one’s own mitigation.
Yet your smile your poetry
one will gladly hold dearly
with in one’s heart forever,
as life blends with in
one’s terminal sunset
before methodically melting
into the golden horizon!

© Harry J Horsman  2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 8, 2016 at 11:27 PM
Hi Harry, Congratulations on your -SUNSET- win..... Love LINDA
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January 1, 2016 at 10:27 AM
What a great poem for top honor Harry. Congratulations and Happy New Year.
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Absolutely beautiful poem Harry congrats on your top spot and Very best wishes for 2016:-) hugs Jan xx
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January 1, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Harry, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I really enjoyed every entry. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "On the first day of January - Next To Me" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate your win on the first day of January.... Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT
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January 1, 2016 at 10:05 AM
The Poem Is Perfect--- Harry, first I want to thank you for all the love you've given my poetic heart. Happy First day of January. I do hope to hear from you, before the 5th of January. Hugs.. Love SKAT
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January 20, 2013 at 2:48 PM
Enjoyed you work here Harry, quite a good take on "reality" pleasure to read yours Joe..)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 8:49 AM
This is beautiful harry , just love it xx
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January 20, 2013 at 7:52 AM
Beautiful!
A   Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 7:44 AM
Harry, a journey worth living up to. I like the way you took sad longing feelings and turned them into a moment waiting for us on wings... until the world is unseen. forever mums the word I am looking for. glad to read the beautiful image you laid upon my imagination... Brilliant... LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 8:23 PM
oh, my this is so SUBLIME. that is the word for it. It really touches me, harry. One of YOUR best!!
Singleton Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 7:19 PM
Harry Horsman; Beautiful simply beautiful..
Bauer Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 5:37 PM
this is very lovely...
Roberts Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 10:44 AM
Loved it Harry......Seren
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January 19, 2013 at 10:26 AM
Dear Harry, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Have YOU had a "Out of body Experience", or were YOU at the bedside of a dyeing POET. I ask because this POEM is very Vivid.Soup Mail Call in a couple minutes.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
Smith Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 9:42 AM
Bravo! Picked up my morning Saturday moment.
Harrell Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 8:39 AM
A sad poem, Harry. Your feelings come through clearly. Hope you don't hang up your pen, Harry! Love ya, Toquyen
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