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Swan Song

Swan song Play of life an act, so why then react to what’s manifest, as an earth life test? We’re in deep trance, thus our ignorance veils light of our soul, that’s joyful and whole. Love’s magic potion ends thought commotion, seeing all as one, as light of the sun. Holding still focus, along love’s locus, all boundaries blur; bliss beats within stir. God alone is: fact. There’s no this or that. Judging not merit, awake now, hermit. Body: here, now, this, is vibrant with bliss but we feel it not, since in thought’s web caught. Let the dream unfold, in as is foretold, as we play our role ~ love drenched soul our goal. 12-July-2022
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George Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 5:41 AM
'Love's magic potion ends thought commotion, seeing all as one, as light of the sun'..... The all embracing love is the great panacea for all ills of man.... ! Great poem Seeker friend !
Seeker Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 7:14 AM
Thank you, Valsa
Wolf Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:38 PM
God drenches us with His love... We resist, stiff-necked fools that we are...
Seeker Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 2:32 AM
Actually yes. The table is laid, everything’s ready made and yet we flounder about deluded
Krutsinger Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 4:25 PM
Three exceedingly wise lines "Let the dream unfold, in as is foretold, as we play our role ~"
Seeker Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 2:31 AM
Happy these words resonate, Caren
Buhagiar Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 8:40 AM
I am who I am. Exquisite argument.
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