Swan Lake

Pirouetting leaves,
Wafting to the water's edge:
Pizzicato breeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bien Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 2:40 PM
good write :) JB
Fraser Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 12:56 PM
Lovely title to a wonderful Senyru Raul >> James
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 10:10 AM
I will have a seat close to the music man and a glass of wine please. ~~~Magnificent Raul~~~ Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 8:30 AM
I love the way you have incorporated music into your poetry Raul !! Beautiful!! ~ Carrie
Strand Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 4:37 AM
Like the alliteration Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
Pickett Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 11:56 PM
Tough word play Raul, but you made it work..AWESOME...New fav......:JP]
W Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 11:51 PM
dancing in he wind beautiful...............kate
Canady Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 6:27 PM
What A Beautiful way to describe Leaves dancing in the wind... Only you would have thought of it... Nature Own Opera/Ballet Lovely Raul MoonBee
Chircop Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 6:07 PM
dancing whirling leaves wafting filling the lonely pond with their dance,wow i love the Pizzicato breeze,this music played with fingertips,serene in its lonely pond,romantic in its melody--Yes ,Swan Lake-so Beautiful going to my favs,excellent write Raul--Charma
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September 28, 2009 at 5:44 PM
Raul, we posted similar poems at the same time. Cool! Love, BG
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