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Swallows In the Fog

Moisture coated chair and table Silvery fog everywhere Birds sing happily 'pon wet limbs A few fly in thick air The Swallows are back flying high Hunting bugs over fields Their sonar a guide where sight fails Bouncing off bugs their peal My thoughts like a three ring circus Bouncing around in my head Foggy confusion dominant Time on the porch clear dread My free time soon to diminish Noise, bedlam will increase Lord, help we take it with patience Let my spirit love release For every good thing there is a bad thing to counter act the joy....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/3/2013 4:01:00 AM
Wonderful piece. I agree with Nette. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/1/2013 7:08:00 PM
good stuff,i feel the reality of the pole,s to acknowledge is life thank you
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Date: 4/30/2013 11:17:00 PM
I like this Sara,,,, I always look on the bright side, there might be a bad side to the good side, but I alway try not to look over there ;} you have a blessed day ;}
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Date: 4/30/2013 7:37:00 PM
I rarely give a wow Sara, but this is a WOW. It's truly beautiful, the third stanza I adore, it's a poem in its own right. This goes to my faves. Take care, Richard
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Date: 4/30/2013 7:36:00 PM
This is by far one of your best poems that you have shared with us on the Soup! I truly loved reading this incredible and enlightening write this evening! What a lovely piece, such a talented quill you hold Sara, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/30/2013 3:05:00 PM
again your visual aspects to your poetry is wonderful Sara..
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Date: 4/30/2013 12:00:00 PM
Excellent poem Sara, enjoyed seeing two of my favorites fog and swallows in a poem together.
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Date: 4/30/2013 11:56:00 AM
patience erases the bedlam... a wonderful poetic approach, sara.. enjoyed this..:)
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