Sara Kendrick Poet Tail-rhyme

Swallows In Flight

As the Swallows dive, catching bugs
Half- moon shining through Willow tugs
At my heart strings my love

Early in the morn heart takes flight
As Swallows grace sky~ wings of might
Their love romance speak of

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Elizabeth Wesley July 28, 2011 at 9:16 PM How I love bird verses, They fascinate me and your verse is too.

Don Johnson July 11, 2011 at 4:58 PM Lovely verse here, swallows diving without fear. Aussies in the middle east war in 41 or 42 got a swallow tattoo on the back of the right hand too...the pommy soldiers did too.... xo, Don

Nick Bagnall July 1, 2011 at 5:37 AM I was looking up tail-rhymes and dropped on this pretty example, glad to have read it.

Jancarl Campi June 24, 2011 at 3:50 AM This is a lovely poem. It was a delightful read this early (6am) morn. Take care and God bless. Jancarl

Andrea Dietrich June 23, 2011 at 9:46 PM swallows are so nice. This is lovely, Sara.

James Foulk June 23, 2011 at 1:56 PM love nature poetry as you know, this one is so lovely and tender i will put this one in my favorites. thank you for commentint on When Your're Young.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 23, 2011 at 8:26 AM wonderful so far even if incomplete Sara.. let me know when finished luv.. see u got the tail-rhyme down pat alright.. curious for more my friend..luv..