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Swallows In Flight

As the Swallows dive, catching bugs Half- moon shining through Willow tugs At my heart strings my love Early in the morn heart takes flight As Swallows grace sky~ wings of might Their love romance speak of

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/28/2011 9:16:00 PM

How I love bird verses, They fascinate me and your verse is too.

Don Johnson

Date: 7/11/2011 4:58:00 PM

Lovely verse here, swallows diving without fear. Aussies in the middle east war in 41 or 42 got a swallow tattoo on the back of the right hand too...the pommy soldiers did too.... xo, Don

Nick Bagnall

Date: 7/1/2011 5:37:00 AM

I was looking up tail-rhymes and dropped on this pretty example, glad to have read it.

Jancarl Campi

Date: 6/24/2011 3:50:00 AM

This is a lovely poem. It was a delightful read this early (6am) morn. Take care and God bless. Jancarl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2011 9:46:00 PM

swallows are so nice. This is lovely, Sara.

James Foulk

Date: 6/23/2011 1:56:00 PM

love nature poetry as you know, this one is so lovely and tender i will put this one in my favorites. thank you for commentint on When Your're Young.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/23/2011 8:26:00 AM

wonderful so far even if incomplete Sara.. let me know when finished luv.. see u got the tail-rhyme down pat alright.. curious for more my friend..luv..