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swallows hiku

swallows' offspring
 
            leave their nest soaring . . .

                        sky is a playground

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Kelly Deschler

April 9, 2022 at 10:13 AM

A lovely poem! I could clearly see the imagery while reading it... Well done, Andrea! Congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus

April 7, 2022 at 9:33 AM

Back with congratulations, Andrea. I had no doubt this would finish high on the list. ~ Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

March 29, 2022 at 1:25 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. Loved your line, "sky is their playground." Now that is a huge playground. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 29, 2022 at 10:51 AM

What delightful images! Congratulations, Andrea.

Eve Roper

March 28, 2022 at 9:23 PM

Great imagery, Andrea , congratulations on your win on Tania Kitchin's Bird Haiku contest.

Kim Rodrigues

March 28, 2022 at 9:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea!

Sara Kendrick

March 28, 2022 at 6:15 AM

Back with congrats. Way to go. Sara

Christuraj Alex

March 27, 2022 at 8:30 PM

"sky is their playground" - indeed! Huge and vast. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin

March 27, 2022 at 4:37 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku, I can picture them in the sky!

Connie Marcum Wong

March 19, 2022 at 1:17 PM

Very sweet imagery Andrea. This should do well in her contest. Blessings xxoo

Jack Horne

March 19, 2022 at 9:14 AM

oh, love this

Heidi Sands

March 18, 2022 at 5:57 AM

Very nice. Love the playground :)

Valsa George

March 18, 2022 at 3:27 AM

I imagine the little swallows making sky their playground.... ! Quite cute, Andrea!

Howard Kerr

March 17, 2022 at 11:54 PM

Hi Andrea, Thanks for your insights on canary and Fireflies And Stuff. Swallows is a heavenly haiku that never strays from its essential theme Howard

Howard Kerr

March 17, 2022 at 11:42 PM

Hi Andrea, Thanks for your insights on canary and Fireflies And Stuff. Swallows is a beautiful haiku. Howard

Howard Kerr

March 17, 2022 at 11:49 PM

Joseph P. DiMino

March 17, 2022 at 7:04 PM

Should be so for all us, inheritors of the Spirit of Wings. Lovely write. Thank you for sharing. Joe.

Joe Maverick

March 17, 2022 at 12:42 PM

And they're off..' blue skye thoughts I gather from this; Andrea'

James Marshall Goff

March 17, 2022 at 11:52 AM

So true, good 'ku Andrea!

Eve Roper

March 17, 2022 at 11:18 AM

Oh, I can see the swallows.. good one.

Caren Krutsinger

March 17, 2022 at 2:06 AM

Lovely Andrea; brings spring to my heart.

Bj Legros Kelley

March 16, 2022 at 11:54 PM

So sweet Andrea <3 This is an adorable and joyful haiku! <3 ~BJ

Janice Canerdy

March 16, 2022 at 3:05 PM

Lovely, descriptive haiku, Andrea. Janice

Paul Callus

March 16, 2022 at 6:54 AM

This projects a direct and indirect image, Andrea....the young energetic swallows romp in the sky, while the older ones sit on wires and watch. I am sure Tania will like this one. ~ Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

March 16, 2022 at 6:10 AM

Ahh!! I like this one. They are so beautiful in flight and when they are diving for insects. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara

Swetha Vangaveti

March 16, 2022 at 2:42 AM

Sky is their playground and sky is your limit!!

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