Swallowed Whole

Written: October 28, 2025 I press my palm against your shoulder, dust-streaked and aged You unfold before me. Heat rises from the folds between the tendon and the tender dough. I savor a bite of the dough. reminiscent of the stars I once folded, now scattered, akin to lost receipts in a tempest. I arrive with my stained skin, as a flyer marred by hurried typos, hastily printed by a restless intern. Here, I consume you wholly. A vendor presents grief in palm-sized parcels, with you wrapped in sensational headlines That twists the truth. I swallow every piece of you, even the mustard staining the captions. But then the rain begins—my likeness of you blurs, my ink a wing in flight as a winged creature. A man in uniform smiles and brushes the sugar from my scalp casting it into the tide, a final farewell.
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Hind Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 5:58 PM
Wow, what a breathtaking piece!! This stole my air, a fav !!
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October 28, 2025 at 3:33 PM
engaging words and imagery. I was drawn to these lines: A vendor presents grief in palm-sized parcels, with you wrapped in sensational headlines That twists the truth. the ending (final farewell) was impactful
Maverick Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 12:23 PM
You were too g-read-y in my observation Sotto, pen sive Maybe expensive?, a whole Sitting is satisfying enough.)
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