Swallowed Death

I wade the waterside enticing death.
The sea extols the brash to th’ outermost
Abyss. A ‘know it all’, I challenged this 
Watery host.

I capsized in the tumultuous seas;
I’m in the heart of the abyssal deep.
The billowing waters; they crest and fall,
Enmesh and sweep.

Disjointed and astray from sight, I strive
Complacently for that redemptive shoal.
This mortuary that’s surrounding me
Entombs my soul.

I look toward the surface as I scan
The depth of darkness for some tethered hope.
I clutch my hands into the obvious
End of my rope.

The moorings are beyond my grasp. I gasp
And struggle for air as I hold my breath.
The hint is clear enough; I closed my eyes
And swallowed Death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations Larry on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
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August 10, 2010 at 9:56 PM
Larry, this is a great poem and I enjoyed reading it. COngrats.Luv, Andrea
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August 8, 2010 at 8:19 AM
Many congratulations Larry on your win in Nikko's fine contest >> James
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August 7, 2010 at 9:42 PM
Congrats on your win, Larry
Smith Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 6:16 PM
Linda ... thx for the support. I am flattered to have placed. Enjoy your day, Larry
Smith Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 6:15 PM
Nikko .. thx for the recognition & I am surprised that you liked. Larry
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August 7, 2010 at 12:11 PM
Congrats Larry on your winning poem in the Twist and Shock contest with this exceptional write and win.. enjoy a sweet victory...with luv..
K. Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:58 AM
Hi Larry! You sure got me hooked with this one and I was dying to know how this ended ;)-- very captivating poem & congrats on being in my winner's list :) -- nikko :)
Smith Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 6:32 AM
I am flattered at the reviews this poem has received. I was not aware this selection has been read by all of the fine folks who took the time to read and review. THX :)
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February 4, 2010 at 2:41 PM
This is one of the best poems I've read so far chico nice work -Nemo
Brown Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Larry. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 9:54 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 2:17 PM
This is an outstanding quatrain, Larry. Congratulations on making it to round two! Merry Christmas, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 11:17 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
Sheart Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 7:21 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Larry. Love Light Patty
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December 3, 2009 at 12:55 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Larry. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 12:13 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Larry >> James
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November 30, 2009 at 9:50 AM
Larry, congratulations on your feature this week. Sincerely, Moses
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November 30, 2009 at 5:51 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Smith Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 1:06 PM
Debbie, Nowthat would make this poem more of a challenge, would it not? I, er ... that might be a consideration for this poem in the near future. Check back now, ya hear!!! :)
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July 30, 2009 at 12:14 PM
I really liked this ine..it's very unique..I just want to tell you something an editor told me...if he sees the word "I" he won't read the verse..........no explaination..though perhaps it's because the "I" is obviuos. For fun take a pass at the verse saying the same thing but without using "I" Light & Love
Shango Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 9:18 PM
I know it is a dream, since I never read a poem a dead poet wrote ... and such a good one. Bravo
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