Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

Swag

Do you see it?
can you see my swag?
feed off it!
come, dance the shag.

Do you see me?
Clean. 
posted, 
checking out the scene.
Do you see me?
Wearing green,
cocky, 
with a full head of steam??

Do you see it?
Can you see the look
of my smooth instrumental.
Listen,
here comes the hook.

Do you hear it???


Jared Pickett
11/20/09
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Nicole Sharon Brown January 15, 2010 at 10:33 AM I like your swag. It's off the chain with creativity, keep writing my friend!

Carol Sunshine Brown November 21, 2009 at 5:22 PM By the looks of the exceptional poems I am reading it looks like you all have new ink pens. I wish you all a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick November 21, 2009 at 3:17 PM Interesting thoughts put to pen. I am thinking that this is about music and a dance but not sure. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks so much for the comments on my work. Sara

Doris Culverhouse November 21, 2009 at 2:00 PM ok another meaning, good one!!

Charmaine Chircop November 21, 2009 at 7:49 AM I see it ,i hear it,Mr Musician,poet..What more?;)marvelloooooooooooousss--Charma

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 21, 2009 at 1:01 AM JP, I see the swag and hear the music of a clean.. green life. (Green is my favorite color!) Nice write. Lovingly, Dane

Raul Moreno November 21, 2009 at 12:22 AM Nice swag Jared, you never cease to amaze me...Raul

Constance La France November 20, 2009 at 8:14 PM i like this.. it could actually be a song... thanks for your comment on my poem jupiter and europa

P Sheart November 20, 2009 at 7:52 PM Every song has to have a hook, LOL! Thanks for sharing and for your comments. Also, Here's wishing you a wonderful Thanksgiving for you and yours! Keep writing. Love Light Patty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 20, 2009 at 3:09 PM Sounds like u are a bit of a musician as well as a poet... I can hear the "hook" in your great poem.. I like it lots... amazing words and flowing so well too... luv ..and thankxxx for your great comments tonight ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"