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Do you see it? can you see my swag? feed off it! come, dance the shag. Do you see me? Clean. posted, checking out the scene. Do you see me? Wearing green, cocky, with a full head of steam?? Do you see it? Can you see the look of my smooth instrumental. Listen, here comes the hook. Do you hear it??? Jared Pickett 11/20/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 1/15/2010 10:33:00 AM
I like your swag. It's off the chain with creativity, keep writing my friend!
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Date: 11/21/2009 5:22:00 PM
By the looks of the exceptional poems I am reading it looks like you all have new ink pens. I wish you all a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2009 3:17:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. I am thinking that this is about music and a dance but not sure. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks so much for the comments on my work. Sara
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Date: 11/21/2009 2:00:00 PM
ok another meaning, good one!!
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Date: 11/21/2009 7:49:00 AM
I see it ,i hear it,Mr Musician,poet..What more?;)marvelloooooooooooousss--Charma
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Date: 11/21/2009 1:01:00 AM
JP, I see the swag and hear the music of a clean.. green life. (Green is my favorite color!) Nice write. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 11/21/2009 12:22:00 AM
Nice swag Jared, you never cease to amaze me...Raul
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Date: 11/20/2009 8:14:00 PM
i like this.. it could actually be a song... thanks for your comment on my poem jupiter and europa
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Date: 11/20/2009 7:52:00 PM
Every song has to have a hook, LOL! Thanks for sharing and for your comments. Also, Here's wishing you a wonderful Thanksgiving for you and yours! Keep writing. Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/20/2009 3:09:00 PM
Sounds like u are a bit of a musician as well as a poet... I can hear the "hook" in your great poem.. I like it lots... amazing words and flowing so well too... luv ..and thankxxx for your great comments tonight ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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