Suzie and Sammy

Suzie sang seductively 
to Sammy the salesman. 

Sometimes she serenaded 
him on Sundays.


11-16-17
Alexis Y
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Very funny and sweet, Alexis. I agree w/the other poets/poetesses, a cute and cleverly written poem. Love always, lady.
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 7:35 PM
very cute!!
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 9:15 AM
I bet susie's singing sounds super lol:-) fabulous alliteration Alexis I love the s sound for this form:-) hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Hi Jan, Lol! I'm thrilled you liked my alliteration. I got inspired to write it after seeing yours:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Hmmm, makes me wonder what he was selling. :) This was cute Alexis. Short and fun, what's not to like?
Y. Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Lol! Enquiring minds would like to know his sales pitch:-) Alexis
Bose Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 8:22 PM
So silly, a simple smile to see. Thankssss, So long, Dave
Vaso Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 7:56 PM
Hello Sally, wish I was Sammy, loved this cute poem!
Stover Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 7:33 PM
Very cute.
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