Suzie and Sammy

Suzie sang seductively to Sammy the salesman. Sometimes she serenaded him on Sundays. 11-16-17 Alexis Y

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/18/2016 11:41:00 AM

Very funny and sweet, Alexis. I agree w/the other poets/poetesses, a cute and cleverly written poem. Love always, lady.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2016 7:35:00 PM

very cute!!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/17/2016 9:15:00 AM

I bet susie's singing sounds super lol:-) fabulous alliteration Alexis I love the s sound for this form:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/17/2016 9:20:00 AM

Hi Jan, Lol! I'm thrilled you liked my alliteration. I got inspired to write it after seeing yours:-) Alexis

Chris Green

Date: 11/17/2016 7:35:00 AM

Hmmm, makes me wonder what he was selling. :) This was cute Alexis. Short and fun, what's not to like?

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/17/2016 7:48:00 AM

Lol! Enquiring minds would like to know his sales pitch:-) Alexis

David Bose

Date: 11/16/2016 8:22:00 PM

So silly, a simple smile to see. Thankssss, So long, Dave

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/16/2016 7:56:00 PM

Hello Sally, wish I was Sammy, loved this cute poem!

Christy Stover

Date: 11/16/2016 7:33:00 PM

Very cute.