Suzanne

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 Such has passed
      the flower
   her soft touch
           her
  pure loveliness
         allure
     comeliness

  such has passed
 the precious days
     which count
    she was born

Such shall not pass
     the promise
 from the One who 
 did raise our Lord
    “to raise all
    who are His”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Austin Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 2:23 PM
Where have you gone, Sir James? Have been watching for your stuff eagerly. Love, Dave
Onclaud Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 8:56 AM
james, a fine write touching me to bits! good winning luck in the contest!! :) hugggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 5:13 AM
thankxx James for your precious comments on my contest entry luv.. so happy when I see your name appear on my work for I so value your words.. as this lovely piece.. hope all is going well with u luv.. and u are happy..
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 11:08 PM
Beautiful one and I see constance was very moved!
La France Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:45 PM
How long will I mourn thee, sweet Suzannne? The whisper, forever and ever, Dear Heart~~~Thank you again, James for your kindness~~
Smith Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 8:09 AM
love this
Guzzi Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 7:26 AM
Hi James...the blogs just right for Noah today! Light & Love
Bloomsfield Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 11:01 PM
a lovely poem in memory of Our dear Cönstance'sister,lately i had time to get to know Constance a bit closer than just a talented poet,She's a wonderful lady and you are a thoughtful friend James. .lovely!
Richards Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 8:43 AM
So wonderfully kind of you, you have an amazing heart, James! :)
La France Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 4:22 PM
James, regarding your question, you would honor me so much, I cannot wait to see it, you would be doing it not just for me, but for Suzanne to, I have a poem, perhaps you did not see, called , A La Memoire de Suzanne, if you have time I would love you to read it~~
Kendrick Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 3:25 PM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Without that Hope we have nothing..Sara
Loving Iii Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 2:56 PM
yes, full of hope. john
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 9:36 PM
wow, what a lovely poem for a lovely lady in the memory of her beautiful sister. Luv, Andrea
La France Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 7:11 PM
James, I came on here to thank you for your comment on my blog, and then to see this, I am brushing tears away, you truly understand my pain, and i will forever treasure this poem and your thoughtfullnes, the Lord is smiling down on your compassion for this girl, every year I go through the whole thing again and again, it remains vivid and heart breaking, I will never forget the knock on our front door and my mothers scream, ever~~
Devonshire Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 11:09 AM
This is such a loving dedication to Constance's sister and I'm very sorry for her loss. You inspire hope in the last line, my friend, and that is much appreciated by people who are mourning. Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 10:05 AM
I just came back from commenting in Constance's blog about her sister and you are a wonderful soul to write this tribute to her-- Very touching and I am sure that Constance will cherish this -- a very comforting tribute-- beautiful James! God bless you for writing this :) -- nikko :)
Neels Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 8:08 AM
A beautiful touching write James.. Hope your Sunday will be a stunning and blessed one, love Wilma
Austin Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 8:06 AM
This is such a tender, touching poem, Robert. There are tears in my eyes. Love, Dave
Onclaud Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 5:50 AM
serenity flows into your phrases so sheen, james.... i like the power of repetition here! may your sunday be as warm as you! :) huggs, nette
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January 30, 2011 at 5:48 AM
Beautiful write my friend...very nice...Michael
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