Suzanna

There was a young girl from Japan 
Whose name was Suzanna Tienshan 
She didn’t wanna work 
Her whole life as a clerk 
So she married a dirty old man.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Collins Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 8:30 AM
Hi Cheryle -- Thanks for putting a smile on my face. I'm new and just putzing around. Kathy
Sanders Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 8:36 AM
Hi, Kathryn, i'm new here also, well about two weeks old. Thanks for commenting on this, much appreciated! chez x
Smith Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 10:43 PM
Speaking as a dirty old man, I see Suzanna wishing she were a clerk again. He, he.
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January 1, 2012 at 10:22 PM
Ha! That's nice work. Keep it up!
Michelle Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 3:04 PM
oh and are you from japan ? ( look me up to tell )
Michelle Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 3:02 PM
hey that is kind of needs more these are more words that can go with it dork , fork and hork come on
Sanders Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 3:07 PM
Me thinks you need to polish up on your English! And it is a Haiku, a Japanese style of poetry. Thanks for your comment! chezchez
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