Suzanna

There was a young girl from Japan Whose name was Suzanna Tienshan She didn’t wanna work Her whole life as a clerk So she married a dirty old man.

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Date: 1/10/2012 8:30:00 AM

Hi Cheryle -- Thanks for putting a smile on my face. I'm new and just putzing around. Kathy

Cheryle Sanders
Date: 1/10/2012 8:36:00 AM

Hi, Kathryn, i'm new here also, well about two weeks old. Thanks for commenting on this, much appreciated! chez x

Date: 1/1/2012 10:43:00 PM

Speaking as a dirty old man, I see Suzanna wishing she were a clerk again. He, he.

Date: 1/1/2012 10:22:00 PM

Ha! That's nice work. Keep it up!

Date: 1/1/2012 3:04:00 PM

oh and are you from japan ? ( look me up to tell )

Date: 1/1/2012 3:02:00 PM

hey that is kind of needs more these are more words that can go with it dork , fork and hork come on

Cheryle Sanders
Date: 1/1/2012 3:07:00 PM

Me thinks you need to polish up on your English! And it is a Haiku, a Japanese style of poetry. Thanks for your comment! chezchez