Sutra Afterglow

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Kai Michael Neumann's Contest: Afterglow...6 Apr 25

Sails an evening when breaths lay quietly On obscure places fluid as winds, Where afterglow of joy becomes a hammock lulling frayed veins with lemongrass tea. Sails an evening allowing surrender its hypnotic intoxication The exchange of matter and being-- A silent play of sutra glances heaving along red moonlit air, as two palms ignite a charmed lure, kama passion pure: For across the distance sails a glow of evening.

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/8/2025 12:40:00 PM

Afterglow~ an absolutely delightful and sensual poem ~ a thread of desire and pleasure. ~ Regards // paul

Paige Hind

Date: 4/10/2025 2:28:00 PM

Absolutely breathtaking, Nette. In my favs- it's beautiful, and unique.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/10/2025 11:06:00 AM

Nette, an intoxicating image of pleasure. Nothing wrong with that! Quite a compilation and a pleasure to read.

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/6/2025 10:03:00 AM

Senual are your metaphors of the afterglow experience, truly well-done, Nette. love it so much~ fav

Tom Woody

Date: 4/6/2025 6:04:00 AM

A hammock, lemongrass tea, a soft red moon and a warm hand to hold. It don't get much better than that Nette

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/5/2025 10:40:00 PM

Sounds a very soothing situation to be in Nette, where you're at peace with the world. Enjoy your weekend. Tom