Nette Onclaud Poet Light Verse

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Kai Michael Neumann's Contest: Afterglow...6 Apr 25

Sutra Afterglow

Sails an evening when breaths lay quietly
         On obscure places fluid as winds,
Where afterglow  of joy becomes a
                      hammock
lulling frayed veins with lemongrass tea.

Sails an evening allowing surrender
     its hypnotic intoxication
The exchange of matter and being--
A silent play of sutra glances
   heaving along red moonlit air,

as two palms ignite a charmed lure, 
     kama  passion pure:
          

For across the distance sails a glow of evening.

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Paul Callus May 8, 2025 at 12:40 PM Afterglow~ an absolutely delightful and sensual poem ~ a thread of desire and pleasure. ~ Regards // paul

Paige Hind April 10, 2025 at 2:28 PM Absolutely breathtaking, Nette. In my favs- it's beautiful, and unique.

Duke Beaufort April 10, 2025 at 11:06 AM Nette, an intoxicating image of pleasure. Nothing wrong with that! Quite a compilation and a pleasure to read.

I Am Anaya April 6, 2025 at 10:03 AM Senual are your metaphors of the afterglow experience, truly well-done, Nette. love it so much~ fav

Tom Cunningham April 5, 2025 at 10:40 PM Sounds a very soothing situation to be in Nette, where you're at peace with the world. Enjoy your weekend. Tom