Sustaining Love

Flicker Love light grows First flames burn bright Then rain begins to fall Flicker For Brians's contest.

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Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/26/2010 7:13:00 AM

A lovely write, the imagery is wonderfully clear and the form perfect. Michael

Marty Owens

Date: 1/25/2010 9:00:00 PM

Very nice....Good luck in the contest...Marty

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/25/2010 6:59:00 PM

Dear Barbara, YOU are on a Roll I'll have to practice the Typing my LOVELY Teacher Taught me to respond TO all the Winning Contest YOU will be Recieving LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2010 4:57:00 AM

I say from the poetry I am reading this morning it seems it was an inspiring weekend for all. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Barbara. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 1/25/2010 12:47:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Barbara Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2010 3:36:00 PM

Isn't that always the way, Barbara. It starts with a flicker, the flame burns brightly for a while, and then the soft flame flickers gently again before surrendering to darkness. Awesome cingku and a very nice "rondel" to enter in Brian's contest. He's always giving us tough challenges, but you seem to rise to each one. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/24/2010 2:43:00 PM

nicely penned, reminds me of a poem I did...flickering I think is the name.