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Sustaining Love

Flicker
Love light grows
First flames burn bright
Then rain begins to fall
Flicker


For Brians's contest.

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Michael Degenhardt

January 26, 2010 at 7:13 AM

A lovely write, the imagery is wonderfully clear and the form perfect. Michael

Marty Owens

January 25, 2010 at 9:00 PM

Very nice....Good luck in the contest...Marty

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

January 25, 2010 at 6:59 PM

Dear Barbara, YOU are on a Roll I'll have to practice the Typing my LOVELY Teacher Taught me to respond TO all the Winning Contest YOU will be Recieving LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 25, 2010 at 4:57 AM

I say from the poetry I am reading this morning it seems it was an inspiring weekend for all. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Barbara. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

January 25, 2010 at 12:47 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Barbara Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

January 24, 2010 at 3:36 PM

Isn't that always the way, Barbara. It starts with a flicker, the flame burns brightly for a while, and then the soft flame flickers gently again before surrendering to darkness. Awesome cingku and a very nice "rondel" to enter in Brian's contest. He's always giving us tough challenges, but you seem to rise to each one. Love, Carolyn