Michael Craig Poet Rhyme

Sustainable Love

Out of the blue,
love engulfs you.
As Dante's Infernal,
it can be eternal.
Those youthful puppy smells.
Fresh as new love prevails.
Ceaseless are all tomorrows.
A love new sometimes follows.
Combustible heat love at its peak
Sustainable love not for the weak
With a struggle now and then
Only the stubborn diligent win
With a love that will never end

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 15, 2019 at 12:36 PM Fantastic piece. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 15, 2019 at 10:02 PM I actually didn't notice. If I do notice any I can soupmail you if you like, and please return the favor. xomo Michael Craig March 15, 2019 at 4:25 PM I wanted to thank you for not pointing out the spelling error. I put peek when it should have been peak. I'm a bad speller really hinders my writing. Very self conscious about it but thank you for the kind words you have written about my work.