Suspicious Through the Year

Calling time is here; hand me the phone dear
Fun for all that lovers call
Will they miss you this year

Snows flare in the air, they are every where  
My lines or your lovers’ rhymes
Which one you deeply care

Snows flare in the air; I’m goin’ no where
Come, be by my side
And leave the phone just there

My love, I am here; there’s no other dear
Oh, why can’t you really see
Suspicious through the year


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Poem inspired by JH’s CCC Poetry Contest
and was based on Christmas Time is Here
by Vince Guaraldi, 1965

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/24/2008 3:51:00 AM
My dear friend, Ernesto, Congratulations on your win, and warest wishes to you and your family for the HAPPIEST CHRISTMAS AND BEST NEW YEAR. Lainie
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Date: 12/20/2008 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest, and have a happy holiday! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/18/2008 3:13:00 PM
Ernesto my friend - Congratulations on placing in John's contest - excellent poem - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/18/2008 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations Ernesto on your win in John's contest! Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/18/2008 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in John Heck's contest! Well deserved!!! ~Carrie
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Date: 11/18/2008 1:08:00 PM
I can feel the pain of distrust in this one Ernie maybe you should take her gently and set her on the curb. Please read and comment on Raul Moreno's poem's thank you Michael Torres he wrote one about me and I'm humbled by it.
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Date: 11/18/2008 1:08:00 PM
I can feel the pain of distrust in this one Ernie maybe you should take her gently and set her on the curb. Please read and comment on Raul Moreno's poem's thank you Michael Torres he wrote one about me and I'm humbled by it.
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Date: 11/18/2008 12:52:00 PM
Pleasnt poem I have read it again and again. Realy a good attempt with fresh brain.
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