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Suspended In Surprise

SUSPENDED IN SURPRISE wrapped in legs and arms, sandwiched between two grandsons. sheets in disarray would not impede the octopus hold, attempt to halt their impending flight home. a little hand in mine, our feet planted on pavement. i try to disengage, say goodbye. “where are you going?” those little eyes suspended in surprise as he finds out we have two different paths. reluctantly his fingers uncurl. his brother jumps up, holding me tight. “when will you come to visit us?” a heavy sag to the car as i divide my heart. i nap. i dream. i feel his squeeze. flight delayed til morning light. my son frowns but his sons squeal with delight for more happy hours with grandma. 8/7/2018

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Date: 8/8/2018 9:00:00 PM
Aww, Kim, your poem is full of heartwarming love. Glad your got to spend more time.. such a sweet write! warmest wishes always my friend. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2018 10:00:00 PM
Thank you, dear Susan! Hugs...Kim
Date: 8/7/2018 11:58:00 PM
Awe, grandchildren a delight and wearing..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2018 5:41:00 AM
For sure on both accounts!
Date: 8/7/2018 8:35:00 PM
Awwwww This makes me so sad because I remember sobbing all the way home on a four hour drive, where I was driving, because I had to leave my six month old baby granddaughter.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2018 9:14:00 PM
Aww! Hugs, my friend!

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