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Suspended In Motion

The swirls of life Currents in the sea The thrusts of living Push and pull of loving Highs and lows of aging The gusts of fate Gyrations The pace of dance The swaying And never at rest AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on October 15, 2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/17/2018 11:18:00 AM

"A moveable feast," as it were. ~ gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/17/2018 11:20:00 AM

Indeed. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/16/2018 3:19:00 PM

One can almost feel the sensations. Great one.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 3:26:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, ML.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 10/16/2018 2:56:00 AM

This poem is making me dizzy! Well written. Thank you

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 5:27:00 AM

It's a good thing it wasn't any longer then. LOL Thanks for your visit and comment, Timothy.

W.A. Cholt

Date: 10/15/2018 4:33:00 PM

I like this. It moves with the motion of life, and so true.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2018 6:55:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, WA.