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Suspended In Motion

The swirls of life
Currents in the sea
The thrusts of living
Push and pull of loving
Highs and lows of aging
The gusts of fate
Gyrations
The pace of dance
The swaying
And never at rest



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Posted on October 15, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/17/2018 11:18:00 AM
"A moveable feast," as it were. ~ gw
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Date: 10/17/2018 11:20:00 AM
Indeed. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 10/16/2018 3:19:00 PM
One can almost feel the sensations. Great one.
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Date: 10/16/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, ML.
Date: 10/16/2018 2:56:00 AM
This poem is making me dizzy! Well written. Thank you
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Date: 10/16/2018 5:27:00 AM
It's a good thing it wasn't any longer then. LOL Thanks for your visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 10/15/2018 4:33:00 PM
I like this. It moves with the motion of life, and so true.
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Date: 10/15/2018 6:55:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, WA.

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