Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Suspended In Motion

The swirls of life
Currents in the sea
The thrusts of living
Push and pull of loving
Highs and lows of aging
The gusts of fate
Gyrations
The pace of dance
The swaying
And never at rest



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

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Gershon Wolf October 17, 2018 at 11:18 AM "A moveable feast," as it were. ~ gw Line Gauthier October 17, 2018 at 11:20 AM Indeed. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.

M. L. Kiser October 16, 2018 at 3:19 PM One can almost feel the sensations. Great one. Line Gauthier October 16, 2018 at 3:26 PM Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, ML.

Timothy Mcguire October 16, 2018 at 2:56 AM This poem is making me dizzy! Well written. Thank you Line Gauthier October 16, 2018 at 5:27 AM It's a good thing it wasn't any longer then. LOL Thanks for your visit and comment, Timothy.

W.A. Cholt October 15, 2018 at 4:33 PM I like this. It moves with the motion of life, and so true. Line Gauthier October 15, 2018 at 6:55 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, WA.