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Suspended In A Sunbeam

Quote by: Melancholy Of Innocence LOVE is the spark within the speck illuminated & suspended in a sunbeam. A ray of sunbeam falls across her face as she plays piano a warm sunlight caresses the keys and brings to life memories of love that bloom like noon day sun Suspended in time like a soft sonata lingering on the mind sensual, sexy, like a silk chemise wafting in the wind yesterday's story sits unsung, arias captured OH! my heart Here in her forever she sings softly to no one in particular habile as the sentinel that perches and then soars the illumined face of an Angel, a speck a spark of LOVE that no amount of silence can clothe....

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/31/2024 7:21:00 PM

Such a tender moment of joy and reflection ... Beautifully captured by your pen, dear Rose!

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/25/2024 12:30:00 PM

Perfect! You get a FAV from me. If suspended my time by fate...then, Dear Lord, let my animation be love!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/25/2024 1:56:00 PM

I second your emotion, Joe. Let my animation be love too

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/25/2024 2:30:00 AM

Incredibly beautiful poem, Rose. Great alliteration, imagery and depth of thought. How I wish I learned how to play the piano. Hugs.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/25/2024 2:35:00 AM

Thank you Victor, hope your keeping well :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/24/2024 5:00:00 PM

Magnificent poem, Rose! I felt tenderness with your individual lines and imagery. The subtle use of the 's' alliteration was effective, just the right amount of alliteration. Your evocative words captured the beautiful essence of memories of love. Exquisite! Wishing you a splendid evening, hugs, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/25/2024 2:34:00 AM

I love to watch prisms of light come out of a sunbeam, its beautiful. Thanks for reading :)

Silent One

Date: 5/24/2024 12:14:00 PM

Your poem beautifully captures the intersection of music, sunlight, and memories, weaving together imagery and emotion to create a vivid and evocative scene. The opening lines paint a picture of warmth and intimacy, as the sunlight falls across her face while she plays the piano. The imagery of "warm sunlight caressing the keys" evokes a sense of tenderness and connection, bringing to life memories of love that bloom like the noonday sun.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/24/2024 2:49:00 PM

you have interpreted this so well S, are you sure we haven't met before ?

Jay Narain

Date: 5/24/2024 10:27:00 AM

Nice poem.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/24/2024 2:49:00 PM

Thank you Jay, much appreciated