Suspect Deal

My friend called Jerry Shorten
Saw a great deal and bought in,
The company went broke
Alas poor bloke
Now listens every day to the warden.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Eastman Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 10:32 AM
Is this the guy that when he got out... married a wife... who made him ground down his teeth... and made him go deaf... Dear Jerry... Stay where you are! Trust me! LOL...
Laurie Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 8:15 PM
G'day John... shady deals usually end up this way. Is Jerry related to Bill Shorten? Lindsay
Williams Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 9:21 PM
Hello Lindsay, hahaha----a 2nd cousin I believe----------thanks Lindsay-----John
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 8:21 AM
- A bad business :)) - I wish you a relaxed weekend, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 6:53 AM
Guess it was not such a great deal in the end!!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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