Susie the Hungry Chicken

Susie strutted through short brown grass,
clucking and scratching with intent.
Searching for a worm of high class
filled with a luscious green content.

Susie tripped over a green bug
that appeared scrawny - very weak.
He promptly advised a fat slug,
that would look nice between her beak.

Susie declined to let bug go,
but words sounded so alluring.
She knew that slugs were very slow,
that made it still more assuring.

Susie set to search on dry ground
for slug to add to her cuisine.
At once remembered they are found
where grass is lively, wet, and green.

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

First Place Winner ~ "Story Poem” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Carol Eastman
Aug. 9, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 2:38 PM
I keep clicking on poems and I swear I must have read all your stuff. This is a fun one I am coming back to. Get busy with some more!
Muzzey Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:05 PM
You're funny Andrea... Ha Ha Ha!! I would write one for your contest but me and limericks don't like each other as well as a couple of other types...
A   Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 2:03 AM
Hi Carly, Congrats in Carol's story poem win. always ~~ LINDA ~~
Muzzey Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Thank you Linda. ~C a r y l
A  Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 12:16 AM
Carly,, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT
Muzzey Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 5:19 PM
Thank you SKAT. ~C a r y l
Allison Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 1:39 PM
a delightful fun story congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 12:49 AM
yuk, they sure eat disgusting things. haha. I had to search way back for one I had not read yet. This was good fun!
Anderson Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 10:15 PM
Hey Caryl, Thx for reading my poem and leaving comments....I've asked Audrey to post this comment on my behalf.... Jimmy
Taylor Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 10:22 AM
Nice job Caryl. Enjoyed it. Got a chuckle. Keep 'em comin'. xxx Ralph P.S. Thanks for your comment on my stuff.
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March 20, 2010 at 6:25 AM
Hi My Poet Friend, after the judging was complete for my contest, I decided to search for your poem (to see who wrote it) so I could tell you personally that I really appreciated you for supporting my contest. I feel sad when I have to leave poems out...and really sad when I find out that it was someone whose work I enjoy reading. Picking winners is VERY DIFFICULT! Lovingly, Dane Ann
Moreno Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 1:25 PM
Beast of luck in the contest, nice work Caryl...Raul
Palli Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 12:48 PM
I enjoyed that, good luck.
Haick Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 3:20 PM
Awh, what a delightful cute write, Caryl!! Could morp into a children's book, you know? Good luck in Dane Ann's Contest!! Peace, love, Audrey
Devonshire Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 1:28 PM
Cute poem, Caryl. I'm sure Dane Ann will love this one! And it always amazes me how much we enjoy eating creatures like chicken and fish whose diets are comprised of worms and bugs. Think I should go vegetarian now! Love, Carolyn
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March 12, 2010 at 1:13 PM
funny poem, enjoyed today!!
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