Notes About The Poem

Survivor Mode

Dahlias and petunias in bloom
A tired garden glows in early october
~ last rays of sun bestowed



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 5:18 PM
your poem says it all...'a tired garden' is the perfect image.
Gauthier Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 7:09 AM
Thanks, Sara ~ we're all starting to wind down from summer extravanganzas
Meadows Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 6:22 AM
A good description. Well written.
Gauthier Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 6:25 AM
Thanks Daisy for your much appreciated visit and comment ~
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