Steve Meadows Poet I do not know?

Survivor

In this empty room staring at the ceiling
All confused with funny feelings
I’ve got voices in my head
Now I’m talking to the dead
They tell me I’m alive
Cause I survived 
The scary thought, of suicide
They tell me to appreciate 
The life that I am given
And one day I’ll be driven into heaven
Where I will meet the real friends
That I am given
Until this day 
I’ll sit and wait 
For someone to come and end my fate

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Vince Suzadail Jr. July 23, 2009 at 9:19 AM Hi Steve, Many of us battle those feelings. I've never had to deal with voices but a lot of the kids I've worked with do. This is a good honest write. Keep writing. Vince

Nita Martin July 21, 2009 at 10:19 AM hi Steve I read all your work it is very good I like the flow of your work keep it up. I look farword to reading more your friend Nita

Nita Martin July 21, 2009 at 10:18 AM hi Steve I read all your work it is very good I like the flow of your work keep it up. I look farword to reading more your friend Nita

Debbie Guzzi July 20, 2009 at 4:55 PM awww cut this out! refer to A Fool & His Life are Soon Parted ...tickle...I'm going to read more of you NOW! Light & Love

Cody Turner July 19, 2009 at 8:01 AM I like it man, it's a good write and I enjoyed reading it, Cody

Gareth Heslop July 17, 2009 at 10:54 AM Thanks for your comments Steve. Have read a few of your poems. This one brings back some memories of other times.

Heather Foster July 14, 2009 at 7:43 PM I really like Realalistic people... All I can say is we all have our moments...

Carol Sunshine Brown July 14, 2009 at 11:16 AM Steve, I am glad you decided to come back to the Soup. Don't just sit and wait get out and do things. Love, Carol

James Fraser July 11, 2009 at 1:52 PM The only fate that will be ended on the Soup, is a bad comment - and i doubt you will get many or any of them Steve, by the way - A warm welcome to the Soup to you - nice write - live and let write>>James

James Marshall Goff July 11, 2009 at 1:31 PM wait here among friends! Steve! its never boring! and really ignites my writing!!! nice poem!! keep 'im coming!! jim