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Bible: Matthew 8:18 - 27

Surviving the Sea of Galilee

the crowd amassed ‘round —
HE gave orders to cast off
who would follow HIM?

“wherever YOU go,”
a scribe attempts to follow
HIM into the boat

regrettably quick —
for the SON OF MAN’s homeless
and now rocks the boat

overhearing, one
decides he must go bury
— he stalls the SAVIOR

the writer pauses
‘would she make excuses too?”
stops reading — ponders

“come, follow ME,” says
the ONE who walks on water,
steps into the boat

suddenly the sea
shakes violently, pouring forth
buckets of water

unstable footing
thunder and lightning spurs on
tired hands, wrinkled brows

in peace HE slept
awoken not by the storm
but by those afraid

PEACE but stilled the storm
afraid and amazed, they ask,
“what kind of man is this?”

2/4/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Leiser Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 11:25 PM
Ah, beautiful words of Truth! Well written, Kim! God bless :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 6:13 AM
Thank you, sweet Laura! Hugs...Kim
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Lovely, Kim. Beautiful read this Sunday morning. Thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Thanks so much, Line! :)
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