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Surviving Innocence

There is a stain unscathed by time where elders' hands were left behind with scars of gropes and breach of trust upon dear Innocence guilt was thrust The pattern was set The victim was made But wisdom grew with love and age New Innocence climbed arduously out from underneath the shade by reclaiming the self the essence he stole the nightmares she finally stayed long at last to awaken whole Innocence smiled warmed by the light of this day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/5/2017 11:09:00 PM
Ok! Ok, It's official I'm a fan now, great work...
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/6/2017 12:19:00 PM
;) Honoured dear Charlie! It amazes me how one can't really judge one's own work, some of what I've felt my weakest gets the strongest response. With words you can't use the painters' trick, using a mirror to see a canvas with fresh eyes. Thank you.
Date: 3/3/2017 11:27:00 PM
Wow, this is poignant, sad, and beautiful all at the same time! Well written, Maureen and a 7. :)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/4/2017 7:12:00 AM
Wow! Thank you kindly Laura xomo
Date: 3/3/2017 4:21:00 PM
How beautiful....It takes strength and courage to transition from victim to survivor. Uplifting write...
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/3/2017 9:45:00 PM
Thank you Eileen for your dear encouragement. I challenged myself to write this a few years ago because I hadn't yet tackled the topic; I fear it's a 'lil overworked and thus more narrative than my usual. My visual arts have played a more cathartic role. I'm just getting back in to writing, having found the soup (a lover of anthologies, yummy soup it is!) xomo

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