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This was originally posted a week ago under the title, 'Caught, Trapped.'  I've changed it so significantly that it is no longer the same Tanka.  Hence, this submission...

Scurrying about... Darting here and there... panicked Whimpering feebly... Brave predators lick their lips... Caged, trapped... helpless... caught fast

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