Premiere Contest WinnerSurvival : Epic Contest

The snow mobile stops and sinks to the level of the snow, no more to go
Which way do I take for shelter the sure or the maybe
Deciding on a surety hoped the 200 miles was the best option …  but how
can I survive this,  gathering the necessities in a bag light enough to carry
leaving a note on the  vehicle I start my journey slowly   

snow shoes aren’t easy to manoeuvre when you’re tired and afraid
must gain ground by nightfall a shelter of snow  to make.
Plenty of boiled water to keep me going today, but hunger tangs can’t be laid
Food:  I must make a hole to fish, a fire to make and that shelter to build    

I cut blocks of snow and make a shelter for the night
Had means of lighting a fire to give the bears a fright, cut a hole to fish
Am sitting here like a child with stick and string hoping for a bite
A great big tug tells me one is here, I pull with my might to land it near.
Hit its head to kill him with ease, I cut up and cook enough to please….

Suddenly I hear a whimpering noise I look up to see
A husky type dog looking at my tea, I throw it some fish didn’t touch the sides
As with a big gulp was soon in his insides,  then he laid down close to me
Sharing my water and fish and the fire …..    

Weird sounds of nature all through the night
My sleep was shallow as I worked out my plans
Had an early fish breakfast then started to walk
Had a companion with me didn’t feel so alone on these many days
Looked for berries  not the white ones am told…will
Keep up my strength until I get home…..

The greenery I am advised are precarious to devour
Best keep to fish and berries a little every hour
Oh my what’s this lumbering this towards us
A bear ,  a black one,  pulled my anorak over my head, I pray
Arms akimbo so I looked huge and made very noisy yells, bear walked away

A trappers hut smoke I can see, hope he will be as pleased to see me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Yvonne Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 6:20 AM
Great write, great win! A Fav!
Vaso Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Congrats on the win! great write!!
Vinson Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 11:32 AM
Great story, Seren, like you were there, like we were there, hearing about it. : )
Roberts Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 9:23 AM
Hi Doug thank you for your kind words........Seren
Pett Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations Seren, great write, a joy to read, well deserved top spot, Roy.
Roberts Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Hi Roy... I am delighted that it was enjoyed by fellow poetrysoup members.....Seren
Roper Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Seren, big congratulations on this wonderful story Hugs Eve
Roberts Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Hi Eve thanks for commenting....Seren
Hamilton Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Congrats on 1st place Seren great poem hugs
Roberts Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Shadow thank you so much....Seren
Smith Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Congratulations on the top win.
Roberts Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Hey Tim I am flabergasted i got top spot, but delighted...thanks for commenting....Seren
Sands Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Great one Seren!!
Roberts Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 7:04 PM
Heidi thank you for stopping by.....Seren
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