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Survival-of-the-little

Stung with the absence of his father, he excruciatingly rumbled deep inside of his mother’s womb. He stormed out already filled with disappointing void. The mother’s joy was of uncertainty. Memories of her husband, flashed back right in her face once again. She could feel the exhaustion of a lifetime encircled around her and the weight and magnanimity of raising the beautiful baby on her own. Two years creeped by and the bond between them was legendary. The love was so constant and consistent, like the sun will rise. Their friendship thrived through the encroached stormy desert. Her wings unfolded like an angel, extraordinarily patient as a lion hunting. The fondness between them was as phenomenal as THE SERPENT GOD at chichen Itza, that he was unceremoniously detached from her. A devastation of a 4-5 year old separation to a foreign land, felt like an erupted-never-ending-volcanic-nightmare. The purpose of that crushing disconnection, was feeble. he was starved off of food, shelter and raiment. Apportioned milk from animals became the only privilege given. The purest and cleanest form of consumed water, was of a residual of donkeys streamed through the shin of an old dirty black slave man. An occasional feasting on birds, caught through invented-trapping. With innocence, he’ll apathetically rip the head, feathers of the little creatures with bare hands, bury them in the sand of the mountain top desert, hours later, it’s BEANO. He was deprived of even just a glimpse of his family for all those years, he wimped in loneliness. And on a dark frightful night, came the growl of the famous fox, but he survived. Life is fickle and comes without no warning and can’t be anticipated. Survival can not be measured by *echoes* of preventions, it is destined and destiny is not always a gift. The tale unfolds in hardship, a narrative woven through the threads of resilience and survival. The bond between mother and child, tested by separation, echoes the unpredictable journey of life—a journey marked by both strength and vulnerability.

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Date: 12/17/2023 6:19:00 PM
glad i found this - bold, creative, intriguing
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Muhammad S. A. Niasse
Date: 12/30/2023 5:20:00 AM
I’m honored by your words really. Thanks so much
Date: 12/5/2023 5:25:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts, wisdom-filled through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Muhammad S. A. Niasse
Date: 12/5/2023 12:42:00 PM
Words coming from you, means the world to me. Thanks a lot Beata Agustin.
Date: 12/4/2023 4:28:00 AM
Deep and emotive narration, you have expressed this in great depth..
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Muhammad S. A. Niasse
Date: 12/4/2023 10:49:00 AM
This is great coming from an author like you. I am really encouraged as a newcomer. I thank you
Date: 12/3/2023 7:03:00 PM
You have such a unique perspective..
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Muhammad S. A. Niasse
Date: 12/5/2023 12:43:00 PM
I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 12/3/2023 5:47:00 PM
Lovely piece written, I love the depth and narrative precise aura that comes with it. Lovely presentation, well articulated. Welcome to poetry soup.
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Muhammad S. A. Niasse
Date: 12/3/2023 5:55:00 PM
You thought me well, the best author in Nigeria, maybe even in the world. Long live the Princess.

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