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Surrounded

Songs and minutes, smoke and maroons Swirl and shake in a majestic monsoon Words and winds radiate from this relic But it's heartily broken, hardening into a brick She's surrounded by specks of sparkling sand But notices nothing in this loathsome land She feels frustrated-- thrown for a lonesome loop In the desert and deserted, all she does is stoop It's not a secret that she's surrounded But how she remains alone leaves her astounded She looks, and listens, and does legwork But somehow all she sees is dust and dirt There's not a place of paradise-- one oasis Except for her lone entity that can grace all graces Her feelings have descended, discouraged by not a find How can a sapphire so beautiful be so blind? March 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/25/2010 1:12:00 PM
gorgeous groove making those magical moves
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Date: 4/4/2010 9:02:00 AM
I like the conflicting images that fill this write, BD. Sounds like someone who is very confused and many of us can relate to these feelings. Very nice! Happy Easter, Carolyn
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Date: 4/3/2010 4:10:00 PM
Magical write loved the flow Daniel and thanks my friend
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