Surrenderings

I've watched a lover's dying breath
Fly homeward to the sky...
Was tutored by orations
Of the dusky forest's sigh.

Brave, touched the face of madness,
There tried to soothe its pain-
Watched children weep at gravestones
In dark, pain-shadowed rain...

A thousand lovers I have known,
Tho Love's been but a ghost-
Laid waste unto a thousand hearts,
At bedlam's feast, the host!

What then, entices to trod down
Some nobler, hallowed path-
When Love's long wearied labors
Reward me with such wrath?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Winter Avatar
July 12, 2008 at 5:00 AM
So beautifully written! Perhaps it is all in preparation somehow for the real thing, the one you've been waiting for. Outstanding poetry. Love, Shar
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July 11, 2008 at 10:23 PM
Wow Michael, this is a wonderful heartfelt poem by you that drips with emotions for your readers to grasp and feel. Wonderful Job... MPK
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