Surrendering To Her Fervid Wish

These incredible moments spent
with sensual Laura go very slow,
they are generously god-sent;
she has such a passionate glow!
O remote moon with a timid shine,
adorn our night with more brilliance;
let your light be wide and sublime,
let her skin sparkle with radiance!
Shouldn't I surrender to her fervid wish,
inflame her with my touch of artful lover
and let her taste kisses without any rush:
exciting are the dreams of bright color!
Has another man given her everything...
that ecstatic joy to fill her with longing? 


Written on 8/9/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 11:48 AM
ohh, so beautifully designed, andrew... huggs
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