Lori Lucas Mcclure Poet Choka

Surrendering Forever

Two hearts surrender
                                      To what can no longer be
                                  A ravaged heart self-deceived

                                        Desire out of breath
                                 Passion’s fever now grows cold
                                    Our words have fallen silent
      
                                       
                                         Grief akin to pain
                                        Surrendering forever
                                    Past the point of no return.

   written by: Lori McClure
       contest : Relationship Break-ups

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John Posey March 31, 2013 at 6:58 PM Cryptically pleasing.... Just reading it brings understanding.... Jake

Carol Sunshine Brown October 13, 2011 at 10:25 AM Congratulations on your win Lori. Sorry to be late on comment. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2011 at 1:56 AM VERY nice, Lori, Congrats on ;your win.

Poet Destroyer A October 9, 2011 at 12:50 AM THE HEART,, IS A VERY FUNNY TRICK... ENJOYED YOUR POEM LORI,.. HAVE A NICE ONE,..P.D.

Poet Destroyer A October 9, 2011 at 12:46 AM LORI, CONGRATULATIONS ;-) ~ IN Russell Sivey, CONTEST.. GREAT ENTRY,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Lee Ramage October 8, 2011 at 11:46 PM Congratulations on your win, well done. You do grieve relationships, so true. Lee

Edward Ebbs October 8, 2011 at 10:35 PM Congrats on your win...very nice poem...Ed

Charlotte Puddifoot October 8, 2011 at 4:25 PM congrats on your win in the contest, I liked this one the first time I read it, simply put but captures the emotion perfectly...

Wilma Neels October 8, 2011 at 2:31 PM "Past the point of no return.". Great ending Lori!! Congratulations on your win in Russell's contest ;)

Nancy Jones October 5, 2011 at 8:33 PM "grief akin to pain" now there's a thought. Beauty write, Lori. Thanks~N