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Surrender

Surrender makes the Heart at ease when the heart is on over load and can’t be pleased Though life is full of much disgrace I turn the other cheek and give my face A sweet surrender to be heard A sweet surrender to the hurt I give my everything to you Although my everything is used Who will be the one to change this pain? When there's nothing to be gained My load so heavy -my soul so weak I toss and turn and smell defeat But I will wait for mercy to pour down One day I will win back my crown I surrender it all for this is not my home A Sweet surrender to be heard A sweet surrender to the hurt I give my everything to you For I know one day I will be made brand new.....

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Skat A

Date: 4/19/2016 11:33:00 PM

Sanid, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 4/20/2016 3:50:00 PM

So kind! thank you for your time to make me feel so welcomed! So looking forward to making many friends here! hugs- Sandi.

Moon Flower

Date: 4/18/2016 8:08:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Sandi. :)

Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 4/20/2016 3:53:00 PM

All smiles:) thank you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2016 6:56:00 PM

Sandi, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 4/20/2016 3:52:00 PM

Linda- Thank you for such a warm welcome! I am really enjoying this site! I will visit your poems! So exciting! - Sandi