Surrender

I will surrender to you

In the pine forest

Of my dreams

Needle thin twigs

Will soften our fall

as we sink slowly

into each other

The sweetness

Of your fragrance

Mingled with the warm

Damp smell of pine cones

Will envelop us

As we discover and entwine

Our souls.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 24, 2014 at 2:27 PM
Awesome write!! I love the imagery..beautifully written!
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